Monday, July 30, 2012
Gorilla - Noriyuki Matsumae
There were a lot of gorillas in the forests. Hunters caught them. Hunters thought that sold gorillas and got money. One day, one gorilla broke from the cage and escaped somewhere. This gorilla could understand people’s languages and speak them, so it escaped to help gorillas. One gorilla could escape the place where lives people. Gorilla saw a police officer. Gorilla said “Could you help us?” The police officer was surprised because usually, animals cannot speak language as you know. A police officer was composed and said “Where is your friends?” “In the forests near there.” “OK.” One police officer called his companions and went to the forests. Police officers found hunters and arrested them. Gorillas who were caught by them were released.
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14 comments:
You are good writer. Gorilla can speak, and understand language. It was really fun!
-Mikino Kobayashi
Interesting view point. I liked how you twisted the story a bit and made the gorillas talk.Good job!
Interesting view point. I liked how you twisted the story a bit and made the gorillas talk.Good job!
Vanessa
I like how you gave the gorillas the ability to speak to humans. It creates a whole new effect to the story. Great story!
-Kyla Wyryha
Like how the gorilla was capable of talking and helped his friends from the Hunters.
-Sara
It would be nice if all endangered animals could talk and ask for help.
I like your story. it's so fun.
I loved how the Gorilla could communicate with the police officer. It was a neat twist to the story and how he used this to help his friend.
-Melinne
Your writing was interesting. Actually, hunters' action was not good, so I thought they should be arrested. Good writing!
-Koko
I enjoyed reading your story and how you made the gorilla's talk!! Very interesting!
-Taylor
It's funny that the gorilla started talking to the police officer and the police officer didn't run away in fear of talking animals. -Justin
Giving the ability to speak to the gorillas opens up so many possibilities in the story. You took it in a very nice direction, with a good ending!
Sean
it's good, but you were suppose to write more.good job
Masahiro Sakuramoto
It was interesting story for me because you wanted to imply about problem in Africa.
-Kensei Shimizu
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