Sunday, July 29, 2012
War Makes Nothing - Masahiro Sakuramoto
There once was a beautiful wood here, largest wood in Africa. That was over 50 years ago. Now it is just a dry, flat wasteland. There are used to be a peaceful forest. There are many the scars of war.
“How do you think that wood?” scientist A said. “I think there are much resources, and the wood is a good place to research.” Scientist B said. Human beings began to invade the wood in order to examine the wood and Gorillas. Then, scientists took many pictures at the wood.
“We have to chase the human beings!!!!!” leader of gorillas said. Gorillas gathered the forest for council of war. They decided to fight against human beings. They were invaded by human beings. Human beings set fire to a part of the forest, and gorillas got angry to human beings. “We can do it!!!” gorillas screamed. Gorillas’ scream is scattered by the autumn wind.
In middle night, Gorillas attacked a research institute and they sat fire to the research institute. Gorillas succeeded in the attempt and they managed to chase human beings from the wood.
However, human beings retaliated against the gorillas. They used the newest weapon, and tragic war began. In the end, human beings and gorillas disappeared into the ashes.
Subscribe to:
Post Comments (Atom)

9 comments:
Good take on the idea of Humans wrecking nature and being against it. Powerful last sentence that really impacts the reader, congrats on that.
-Sara
You showed the power of man kind on the effects of nature and the idea that the nature would fight back as well. There were a few dialog points and a few lines in the story that really impact the reader.
-Melinne
You stuck to the nature preservation theme quite well. I especially like how you ended it with BOTH sides being destroyed, and not just the people.
Interesting story. I didn't expect the gorillas and humans disappearing.
-Kyla Wyryha
Interesting ending how all the humans and gorillas disappear. Good job!
Vanessa
It was fun! It is dangerous if gorillas got angry.
-Mikino Kobayashi
Your story was interesting. I hope not to realize this story's war.
-Koko Sonoyama
You stuck to the nature preservation theme quite well. I especially like how you ended it with BOTH sides being destroyed, and not just the people.
Sean
It was interesting story…
I felt human's being is very important to forest.
-Kensei SHIMIZU
Post a Comment