Monday, July 30, 2012
Gorilla’s Escape Tactics!! - Taro Goto
Gorillas are living in the place the protection of nature. However there is so boring for gorillas, so gorillas think about how to escape form there. Gorillas think a lot of strategies, but gorillas can’t find good way to escape from there, so gorillas don’t think about that. Gorillas appeal to all gorillas in there. All gorillas are in union. All gorillas prepare themselves. At night, most prison guards are finished their works and time to go to bed. A few prison guards are still working. Then all gorillas try to escape all together. Gorillas are scattered all over the place. All gorillas run and run and run. On the way, one gorillas group are found out by one prison guard, but they dispose that prison guard quickly and silently. Other gorillas groups are shot a gun by prison guards, but gorillas don’t abandon to escape from there. Then all gorillas arrive in front of the outside, but there are big walls tower high over the gorillas. A little bit to be free. All gorillas are struggling for escape from there. Gorillas attack that walls very hard, but that walls are so hard and tall. Gorillas do anything’s that gorillas can do. However that walls can withstand any gorillas attacks, but gorillas still attack hard to that walls, but still that walls can withstand. Then all gorillas perceive that walls can’t break eternally. All gorillas abandon to escape form there. All gorillas must live in there unfortunately.
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16 comments:
It was thrilling story, and I enjoyed to read. However, all gorillas could not escape, so it was sad.
-Mikino Kobayashi
Great job! I like that you changed the whole perspective and made it into an action-packed story.
Vanessa
Good adaption of the video. Interesting story.
-Kyla Wyryha
I like the idea that the gorillas are there because they are forced to be there and not want to. Nice idea of them trying to escape.
-Sara
I guess that is how animals feel when they live in a zoo...
I like your story. That's so funny.
It was interesting how you perceived the caretakers as prison guards. A very neat way to look at the gorillas situation.
It was interesting how you perceived the caretakers as prison guards. A very neat way to look at the gorillas situation.
Sean
I was disappointed that some of the gorillas got shot but none of them got away. -Justin
Nice story, I like how the gorillas were trying to escape and get free. Good job.
-Taylor
Your story was so interesting.
I regretted gorillas couldn't to escape from there.
Your story was so interesting.
I regretted gorillas couldn't to escape from there.
-Koko
Good story. I want to read how the story will develop after this. good job
- Masahiro Sakuramoto
Good job!
Nroyuki
Such a nice story it was!
…because I've never seen a story that from view of Zoo's animal, so it makes me more interesting in animal protection.
Such a nice story it was!
…because I've never seen a story that from view of Zoo's animal, so it makes me more interesting in animal protection.
-Kensei SHIMIZU
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